Angel of Death

Hey Jared!! This was weird but it was good. The only problem I had was the repitition of E-mails between Percy and that other guy. I'm a little confused but ...

Boy do I have lots but I'll settle for two if that's okay Once I tried out to be a cheer leader even though I didn't want to. Its just ...

I carry a notebook everywhere but because when I get an idea so as I don't forget it, I write really fast to the point that the thing isn't even ...

I hate cliffhangers!! Well anyways, another great chapter. Darn, keep this up and I won't be able to critique at all!! All I have to say is that I love ...

Parting is such sweet sorrow but saying hello again for the first time in the long time is like...I don't know. Great!!! Sorry I've been gone for a while, really ...

Whoa... I must say now that you are fantastic writer. The voice that this story possesses reeks years of reading and writing. Just lovely and a quite bit refreshing. The ...

Bravissimo!! This was beautiful and wonderful and magnificent and just plain old catchy. I like how you explained your love but you didn't exactly say the words. I love that ...

Hello, don't think I've seen you 'round these parts before. Welcome to YWS!! *tumbleweed floats across the ground* Okay well anyways, I liked this! Its bordering on the been done ...

If anyone wants to collaborate on a book, story or anything I'm your gal. PM me if anyone wants to work on something. -Angel :D :D :D

Wow! A collaboration! I have not read anything of Bitter's in a while but you two are a perfect mix of sugar and spice. At first it seems like the ...

This was just floating along and I just decided to take a look-see. Here we go!! Okay, to be honest, I couldn't go on. Your sentences are strong, almost poetic ...

Note: Okay this is just something I wrote because I felt like I needed to get it out of my head. Its not done and I know it needs way ...

Thanks for critiquing!! I am actually in the editing stage. So the reason why this hasn't been continued is because chapter one is going under major construction. It might take ...

Ha! Kylan you won't believe what I had to go through to read this! Well to make a long story short, I wasn't home yesterday and so something told me ...

Oh Wow!! Thank you so much for the advice and the compliments. It really made my day!! Yeah, some of the things that are said don't seem 18th century-ish but ...